My remix to "Airplanes"

[RedsCeltics34]

By B.o.B and Eminem... my remix has the Hayley Williams hook in it, I've posted music here before and people have liked it but, I have gotten a lot better and im tryna get noticed. So check this out ad let me know what you guys think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LphJ9x4R_X8

[JSD]

Here is my 100% honest opinion:

You have a nice hip hop tone on your voice and solid delivery. I liked the adlivs you put in too. Nice punchline stuff in the verse but I'm not feeling the content. If I hear another song about how "rap sucks now. what happened to the good old days?" I might kill myself. Seriously. What are you recording on? By chance is it a Macbook internal microphone? Maybe it's my work computer speakers but that's what it sounded like from here.

How old are you? Where are you from? What type of content are you looking to base an album around if you go forward?

P.S. I hope I don't sound overly negative cause I was impressed...

[threats13]

i agree with a lot of what Jsaad said.  Your delivery is strong, your flow is strong but maybe taking the current rap game is whack and im gonna fix it approach isnt the smartest thing.  Since well Nas made an album called Hip Hop is Dead and hes well..Nas.  Overall Im really impressed.  You should look into getting someone to produce for you.  A few of my friends here in New York produce for up and coming artists and theyve managed to get some of them noticed.  Keep up the good work.

[dark_lord]

By B.o.B and Eminem... my remix has the Hayley Williams hook in it, I've posted music here before and people have liked it but, I have gotten a lot better and im tryna get noticed. So check this out ad let me know what you guys think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LphJ9x4R_X8

im feeling it.  TP

[Truck Lewis]

ya pretty much what jsaad and others said.

I like you sound A LOT....i think your voice definitely has what it takes to make a sick album, but i also am tired of the hip hop is dead them.  I get the idea that the tpains and flo rida's exploit the commercial aspects of it, but since we have nas, talib and hi-tek dropping albums in 2 days it is tough to say rap has lost its way.

[dark_lord]

we have nas, talib and hi-tek dropping albums in 2 days

robocopped 

[Truck Lewis]

we have nas, talib and hi-tek dropping albums in 2 days

robocopped 

?

[dark_lord]

we have nas, talib and hi-tek dropping albums in 2 days

robocopped 

?

my bad...sneakerhead lingo.

robocopped--> buying (copping) them all

[jr_3421]

Sounds good but content wise, pretty generic. Keep it up tho, you have potential